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Re: Without Weight
Hi there, Calben. I'm Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, I really want to like this poem. It seems as though there is a deeper ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Nyx
Hi there red_helix7! I am Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, I really like this poem. You use language to paint a rich, exotic image ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: An Angel
Hi there, Lukan. I'm Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, I love this poem. Like, a lot. I love the way it describes this absolutely ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: The Mirror
Hi there, Sanareth! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today! So, I kind of liked this poem. Especially that second to last stanza, the one that begins ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: 7-27-09 I Am...
Hi there anime-girl13. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I really like this poem. It really shows you opening up and talking about the kind ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Time
Hi Auna! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today! So, I am really digging this poem. I like what you're trying to say here, about how we ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Scream
Hi there love-death-poems. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, you hit us with a lot of bad things like, one right after the other, in ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: The Last Storm
Hi there, captain.classy. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I really think that you need to follow the old "Show, don't tell" adage here. You're ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: the Great
Hi there, Gal. I've stopped by to give this a review, as you asked. So, I rather like this poem. What draws me in is all the archaic references that ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: A Night in December
Hi there dawgsnlocust! I'm Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today! So, I liked this conversation style poetry you decided to experiment with. I don't think I've ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Her Beauty
Hi there a_kittens_claws! I'm Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, I liked this poem. It was refreshing to hear a view such as the one ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Linguists
Hi Via! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I really liked this poem. Your use of alliteration was rather well done, in my opinion, and was ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: -shire
Hi Demeter! I'm Conrad, and I'm gonna be your reviewer today. So, I really liked this poem. While I don't care much for the balls and fancy stuff in stories, ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Cat Steps [2] DRAFT
Hi Rosey! I'm getting around to this sooner than I did part two! :P So, I think this part is much better than the first one. I was better able ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Shay's Blu (Prologue)
Hi there Forever. I'm Conrad Rice, and I shall be your reviewer for today. So, it looks to me like there are some minor grammar and spelling errors scattered throughout ...
Jan 3, 2010
